woensdag 8 oktober 2014

Feedback week 1

Hi Anne,

I think you formulated your view on the position clear and the two examples are a positive addition. My only suggestion is that you perhaps could elaborate more on what you called ‘the next step’. Again, I think your three alternatives are clearly explained, but I’m not really convinced of the comparison that is made between a sustainability transition and the labor sector. Perhaps you could give more arguments. Furthermore, I really like your use of pictures. 

Feedback given to socialsystemsinperspective.wordpress.com, the other blog did not had a blog post.

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